JFrancisFright's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Super Maria Sisters]

OMG I was planning on doing something like this as well, same name and everything! Are you a wizard? Can you teach me to be a wizard?

LOL in all seriousness, this came out really great! These designs are super cute, I especially like the hairstyles you gave them. Also diggin' the suspenders and short shorts in lieu of the traditional overalls.

Also, a comic with these two? YES.

[Crystals]

Excellent colors, you did a great job making these look like actual crystals.

maruki responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Go Away, Face Swapper]

This is a seriously creepy concept! I love the expressions on both characters, and the way the Face Swapper is looming over her almost casually. I think if the BG color were a bit darker he'd look even creepier, like he's slowly emerging out of the shadows or something.

Still, awesome work! I wish my nightmares gave me cool ideas like this XD

[Fibble and Sin - Night Ghosts]

I really love the idea behind these ghosts - the restless spirits of dead bastards who goad people into suicide. I also got a real laugh out of the idea of them being little glow lanterns in spooky nightclubs XD

Overall, this is a good story! The only real feedback I'd give is on the third-to-last panel when Sin wakes him up, it's kinda hard for me to tell if he's stabbing him or pulling his flesh off (though both are excellent options for waking someone up). Aside from that, everything was super clear and I really enjoyed it! Keep up the great work =)

Comick responds:

Hey thanks man for the kind words and critque! Yeah you are right about that panel, its not clear if its a rip or a stab. I'll have to polish that next time around! :b and glad you like the ghosts too haha, I'll have to post art on that nightclub one day!