JFrancisFright's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fibble and Sin -The Valentine Job]

The way he spit Cupid's skull at his head made me bust a gut! This was really good, it's always nice to see more Fibble n' Sin XD

Comick responds:

Ah I missed this comment! Thanks man! Yeah that spit was actually hard to draw since he has all those protruding teeth haha, glad it came out looking good! :D

[Crystals]

Excellent colors, you did a great job making these look like actual crystals.

maruki responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Fibble and Sin - Night Ghosts]

I really love the idea behind these ghosts - the restless spirits of dead bastards who goad people into suicide. I also got a real laugh out of the idea of them being little glow lanterns in spooky nightclubs XD

Overall, this is a good story! The only real feedback I'd give is on the third-to-last panel when Sin wakes him up, it's kinda hard for me to tell if he's stabbing him or pulling his flesh off (though both are excellent options for waking someone up). Aside from that, everything was super clear and I really enjoyed it! Keep up the great work =)

Comick responds:

Hey thanks man for the kind words and critque! Yeah you are right about that panel, its not clear if its a rip or a stab. I'll have to polish that next time around! :b and glad you like the ghosts too haha, I'll have to post art on that nightclub one day!